Question

上周日，Mary度過了忙碌的一天。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中Mary周日的行程，寫一寫Mary在忙的時(shí)候，你在做什么？（詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

9:00 am	10:00 am	2:00 – 3:00 pm	4:00 pm	7:00 pm
read English	do math homework	have a piano lesson	visit friends	help mom cook dinner

 
At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV .
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV "At 10,while Mary was doing her math homework, I was listening to music. At 2:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was having a piano lesson, I was visiting my grandmother. We went to the farm and fed the chickens. At 4:00 in the afternoon , while Mary was visiting her friends , I was going fishing by the river. It was relaxing. At 7:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was helping her mom cook dinner, I was watching the stars in the sky ,They were beautiful.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如We went to the farm and fed the chickens..等。They were beautiful.等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。
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