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你喜歡網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物嗎？你對(duì)“網(wǎng)購(gòu)”這一現(xiàn)象有何看法？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，從購(gòu)物的時(shí)效性、安全性、商品的品種、質(zhì)量、價(jià)格等方面說(shuō)說(shuō)“網(wǎng)購(gòu)”相對(duì)于傳統(tǒng)購(gòu)物方式的優(yōu)勢(shì)與劣勢(shì)。

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。