Question

越來越多的環(huán)境污染給我們的地球造成了太重的負(fù)擔(dān)．請(qǐng)以此為出發(fā)點(diǎn)，以自己的視覺寫一篇文章，號(hào)召人們來共同保護(hù)地球、保護(hù)我們?nèi)祟惖募覉@．

要求：

1．行文流暢，觀點(diǎn)鮮明；

2．文章要有深度，有思想，內(nèi)容要豐富；

3．詞數(shù)150～200個(gè)左右．

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

例文： The Earth is Our Homeland 　　Long long ago, our earth was very beautiful．The earth was covered with lots of trees．All kinds of plants and animals lived happily everyday． 　　But now the earth is getting worse and worse．People cut down the trees and kill① their friends－the animals．The dirty water from the factories were drained off everywhere．The air isn't as clean as it ever been．Of course there are too many people on the earth．There must be enough food for them．The earth is very tired． 　　Yet while lots of people love the earth．They are trying their best to do something② for the earth．They have talks or meetings in the public．They have planted more and more trees and want to make the world green again．The world will become better and better．The sky will become much bluer than before． 　　I think everyone should make a contribution to protecting the environment．The earth is our homeland． 修改： 　�、賙ill→killed　and連接對(duì)稱部分． 　　②后加useful更能表達(dá)其含義． 點(diǎn)評(píng)： 　　本文作者有著新時(shí)代青少年所具有的憂患意識(shí)，通過描寫，地球從開 始到現(xiàn)在所發(fā)生在其身上的災(zāi)難都深刻地表達(dá)出來．文章的內(nèi)容較好，語言比較流暢，但也存有一定的語法錯(cuò)誤．望今后在練習(xí)中注意改正．