Question

目前，不少人在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場(chǎng)討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點(diǎn)
1．有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無法理解； 2．違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助。	1．幽默，使語言更生動(dòng)； 2．有助于表達(dá)思想。	1. …  2. …

注意：     

1. 對(duì)所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 參考詞匯：荒誕：ridiculous

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求考生綜述討論情況、雙方觀點(diǎn)并闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)。全文應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。注意闡明自己觀點(diǎn)的部分不要與前文雙方觀點(diǎn)重復(fù)。雖然不可逐條翻譯，但是不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，否則影響得分。注意詞匯等表達(dá)手段的多樣化、避免句式單一。行文要連貫。用自己熟悉的語言，不要生編硬造，避免中式英語。

考點(diǎn)：書面表達(dá)。

【亮點(diǎn)】

本文較好完成了題目規(guī)定的任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)齊全、層次清楚、行文連貫。用詞不落俗套。如用not in favor of而不是多數(shù)考生會(huì)用的against表示“反對(duì)”，用fond of代替for. 在表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候更是直截了當(dāng)：I don’t think it good to use Web Language.體現(xiàn)了表達(dá)的多樣性。