Question

目前我國(guó)中學(xué)生的健康嚴(yán)重下降，引起了父母、學(xué)校和專(zhuān)家的憂(yōu)慮。為解決這一問(wèn)題，有人提出將體育納入高考。結(jié)合實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?/p>

1.是否贊成體育納入高考及原因；

2.簡(jiǎn)述健康與學(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)系；

3.你認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)該做些什么來(lái)提高學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù) 120 左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

 

Answer 1

【答案】

(1)The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.(2)To have this problem solved, some people propose PE included as a subject in the College Entrance Examinations. (3) I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task. It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in sports field.（4）However, good health is an essential foundation upon which to learn. Only when one is in good health can they guarantee efficient learning. （5）Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. Moreover, schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)的書(shū)面表達(dá)，提綱列的非常具體，考生需要用自己所學(xué)的知識(shí)把它們翻譯出來(lái)，但是不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 (1)The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.這是同位語(yǔ)從句

(2)To have this problem solved, some people propose PE included as a subject in the College Entrance Examinations.這是不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)

(3) I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. 這句話(huà)用了 ，Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task.這句話(huà)用了動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)， It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in sports field.這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，

（4）However, good health is an essential foundation upon which to learn.這句話(huà)用了定語(yǔ)從句。 Only when one is in good health can they guarantee efficient learning. 這句話(huà)用了倒裝句。

（5）Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. 這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)